After releasing my second draft, I asked for audience feedback again from my peers in order to give me the ability to improve further again with my music video.
Here is the feedback that I received:
- The urban shots that you have included work well alongside the rural scenery.
- Graphics need to be yet included, which would again add another element to the music video.
- The music video still needs some form of story with the artist, as suggested within the First Draft Feedback - e.g. the actor could get up out of bed, get change and then make some toast with the toast popping up to the beat of the song.
- Overall, the improvements from what was discussed after your first draft are definitely noticeable and make a huge difference to your music video by making it more varied with added diversity - making it more interesting to watch.
I will again be definitely taking this feedback on board, as it helped me to improve First Draft immensely to my second Draft and the difference is noticeable, as it feels more like a music video. Therefore, these comments made will be definitely taken on board when creating my Third Draft.
Hope you enjoyed reading!
See you soon!
